Friday, July 13, 2007
The greatest Misunderstanding Part:2
"Ahhh! How am I going to get away from this lion...I mean bug...I mean lion/bug. It will be hard, but I have to try." I soon came to a meadow. I was too tired to go on anymore. I was done for. As soon as the lion flew down getting ready to drop on me, I was flying. I was flying on one of the most special animals in this place. It looked like part human, part bird, and part horse! I was so stunned that I fainted on its back. When I finally woke up, I was in a cave. After my head stopped spinning I got up. The thing that saved me, whatever it was, was no where in sight; but I found bread and milk on the table with a note. I was horrified by what the note said. It said, "Help!!! I've been captured. Please help by finding Mrs. Heaverorse (meaning half-beaver, half-horse). She lives in the dam by the lake. Thank You, Mrs. Humirdorse (meaning part human, part...you get the idea)." I can't believe anyone would do such a thing to an amazing creature. I better get going. RRRRR! Not so fast! Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
Wednesday, June 20, 2007
The Greatest Misunderstanding!
I lived in a beautiful house. It was old. In fact, it was one of the oldest houses on the street. I loved it. Everyday I went to a building that had a playground. The inside of this building was amazing. It was like a castle. The only thing wrong was that there wasn't a king or queen in it. Since the castle deserved someone, I decided to let its greatest dream come true. I let it have a beautiful, sweet , and wise queen. I was that queen. I think it deserved for me to live in it. Every single day I came as myself; but when I got there, I was the queen. I loved my castle. I wished I could stay in it forever. But every night I had to go home. I told my mother all the adventures I had. But she said, "More learning; less pretending." One night I snuck out of my house. I went to my castle. It greeted me like I'd been gone for 100 years. All of a sudden a light flashed and when the light was gone, it was light outside. I was as confused as a caterpillar walking over and over on the same hand. I was in my castle, I was in my neihborhood, and I was sitting on my throne. Even though everything seemed right, something wasn't. I walked outside and saw lions flying! Bugs were roaring! Horses were quacking and chickens were neighing! I almost fainted when I saw one of those lion-sized bugs come after me. I was in a whole different world!
(Part 2 is coming)
(Part 2 is coming)
Sunday, April 1, 2007
Thank you for reading!
Hey! I hope you enjoyed my story. I was encouraged by my family, friends, and all the people that gave me comments. Thank you very much. I love writing stories, and with your help, encouragements, and ordinary comments when I'm older I might become an author! I will be writing another story soon. I hope you like that one too. I'll write soon.
With all due respect,
Hannah
With all due respect,
Hannah
Tuesday, March 6, 2007
The Girl and the Magic Horse (Part 3)
Lexy,the shark, and the fish watched in horror as they realized that Pebble was in there all alone. Lexy started running toward the darkness, but the shark and the fish held her back. She screamed and hollered, fought and kicked, but it was no use. The fish and shark would not let her go. They comforted her while she was screaming for Pebble. She loved Pebble with all her heart. Now that Pebble was gone, her heart was broken. Even though Pebble was gone she would always love her with all her heart.
Moments later Lexy heard a voice whisper in her ear. It said "Light." After she heard that there was light everywhere. The light carried her through the water. They passed sharks, jellyfish, and many more sea animals. But they could not hurt Lexy. The light protected her from all evil. Even in the night it was as light as day. Lexy had no nightmares because of the light. She felt safe. The only saddness inside her was that Pebble was missing.
She kept searching and searching until she saw a dark spot in front of them. At that moment she knew she had reached her destination. The light had carried her through the darkest, scariest parts of the darkness. The dark spot was filled with animals. She went through animal after animal looking for Pebble. Finally, she found Pebble and was stunned to see that he was wounded in the leg. Quickly the light reached out to heal Pebble with its beam. Lexy grabbed Pebble and raced out of the darkness. The darkness felt them going out of him and chased after them in full speed. Pebble screeched at what she saw behind her. The darkness was getting bigger and bigger. What Pebble and Lexy didn't realize was that the light always grew to be twice the size of the darkness. To Lexy's supprise, the light stopped and set them down. He got as big as he could and held back the darkness so Lexy and Pebble could get away.
Lexy and Pebble stood there watching as the light would not let the darkness pass. Then, the light took one mighty blow and turned everything to light. The light dissapeared and left everything else pulsing with light. The darkness exploded. Everything was back to normal. Lexy started crying. The light had sacrificed itself for them. Lexy noticed that there was a little sparkle. Then, there was more. Suddenly, the light was back. The day couldn't be better. Pebble was back, the light was brighter than ever, and she had made some new friends. What could make it better? She went back home with Pebble. She explained everything that had happened to her parents. From this day forth she was filled with joy.
Moments later Lexy heard a voice whisper in her ear. It said "Light." After she heard that there was light everywhere. The light carried her through the water. They passed sharks, jellyfish, and many more sea animals. But they could not hurt Lexy. The light protected her from all evil. Even in the night it was as light as day. Lexy had no nightmares because of the light. She felt safe. The only saddness inside her was that Pebble was missing.
She kept searching and searching until she saw a dark spot in front of them. At that moment she knew she had reached her destination. The light had carried her through the darkest, scariest parts of the darkness. The dark spot was filled with animals. She went through animal after animal looking for Pebble. Finally, she found Pebble and was stunned to see that he was wounded in the leg. Quickly the light reached out to heal Pebble with its beam. Lexy grabbed Pebble and raced out of the darkness. The darkness felt them going out of him and chased after them in full speed. Pebble screeched at what she saw behind her. The darkness was getting bigger and bigger. What Pebble and Lexy didn't realize was that the light always grew to be twice the size of the darkness. To Lexy's supprise, the light stopped and set them down. He got as big as he could and held back the darkness so Lexy and Pebble could get away.
Lexy and Pebble stood there watching as the light would not let the darkness pass. Then, the light took one mighty blow and turned everything to light. The light dissapeared and left everything else pulsing with light. The darkness exploded. Everything was back to normal. Lexy started crying. The light had sacrificed itself for them. Lexy noticed that there was a little sparkle. Then, there was more. Suddenly, the light was back. The day couldn't be better. Pebble was back, the light was brighter than ever, and she had made some new friends. What could make it better? She went back home with Pebble. She explained everything that had happened to her parents. From this day forth she was filled with joy.
Saturday, March 3, 2007
The Girl and the Magic Horse (Part 2)
(Part 1)
After a couple minutes it was light again. Lexy found herself swimming under water!! She saw Pebble racing around like she knew this place by heart. Then Lexy relized if she was under water she couldn't breathe! She frantically searched for some place to breathe. After one minute Lexy had to take a breath. She gasped out for air and discovered that she could breathe underwater. How strange and remarkable! Pebble nudged her telling her to get on her back. Lexy got on, and they started riding in the ocean. It was incredable. All of a sudden, Lexy screamed. There was a shark coming at them! The shark came charging toward Pebble as fast as it could. Pebble ran faster towards the shark. Then to Lexy's surprise, they started hugging each other like they knew each other. Lexy thought it was a dream. It couldn't be possible. Then it got weirder. The shark and Pebble started screaming. They both started running at full spead. Lexy held on tight to Pebble. Lexy looked back to see what was chasing them and there was a terrible sight. There was a fish or something with claws instead of fins and its eyes were huge. But then Lexy saw that it was crying. Lexy screamed "STOP!" This thing is not a monster; it's just a lonely fish looking for someone to play with. But then she noticed that Pebble, the shark, and the fish were running for their lives still. Lexy looked back even farther, and there was a black light. The darkness was heading towards them like a train. Everything behind it was pitch dark. Then the darkness turned into a hand and reached out for them! Suddenly, it looked like everything was nothing. It was darker than the darkest part of the world. Then, Lexy was out of the darkness, and the dark hand was swimming away. Not only was it swimming away, but it was also swimming away with PEBBLE!
(Part 3 is coming)
After a couple minutes it was light again. Lexy found herself swimming under water!! She saw Pebble racing around like she knew this place by heart. Then Lexy relized if she was under water she couldn't breathe! She frantically searched for some place to breathe. After one minute Lexy had to take a breath. She gasped out for air and discovered that she could breathe underwater. How strange and remarkable! Pebble nudged her telling her to get on her back. Lexy got on, and they started riding in the ocean. It was incredable. All of a sudden, Lexy screamed. There was a shark coming at them! The shark came charging toward Pebble as fast as it could. Pebble ran faster towards the shark. Then to Lexy's surprise, they started hugging each other like they knew each other. Lexy thought it was a dream. It couldn't be possible. Then it got weirder. The shark and Pebble started screaming. They both started running at full spead. Lexy held on tight to Pebble. Lexy looked back to see what was chasing them and there was a terrible sight. There was a fish or something with claws instead of fins and its eyes were huge. But then Lexy saw that it was crying. Lexy screamed "STOP!" This thing is not a monster; it's just a lonely fish looking for someone to play with. But then she noticed that Pebble, the shark, and the fish were running for their lives still. Lexy looked back even farther, and there was a black light. The darkness was heading towards them like a train. Everything behind it was pitch dark. Then the darkness turned into a hand and reached out for them! Suddenly, it looked like everything was nothing. It was darker than the darkest part of the world. Then, Lexy was out of the darkness, and the dark hand was swimming away. Not only was it swimming away, but it was also swimming away with PEBBLE!
(Part 3 is coming)
The Girl and the Magic Horse
The Girl and the Magic Horse: Part 1
Most stories start with once upon a time, but this story is not like that. This story could be true or maybe it couldn't. You will just have to read and find out. It has adventure, mystery, saddness, and happiness all in one. It's about a girl and a horse. This horse was not an ordinary horse. It was a magic horse, not the kind that could speak, but the kind that feels like magic when you ride it.
Lexy was soaring around the house on her horse, Pebble. It felt like she was flying. Every morning she would ride around her town and show off her horse. One night she heard Pebble pounding her hooves on the side of the door. Something was not right. Pebble had never done that before. Suddenly, a dreadful thought came into Lexy's mind. "What if there was an animal attacking Pebble!" Lexy felt helpless. She ran outside with her father's gun, just in case there was an animal in the barn. The stall was open!!! Pebble was gone!! "Pebble!!" Lexy screamed. She ran through the town screaming her horse's name thinking maybe she could hear her. But no, Pebble was gone forever. Well, at least that's what Lexy thought. Even though she thought Pebble was gone forever, a little part of her still had hope.
Finally, Lexy saw a silouhette of a horse. She ran saying " Pebble! Pebble!" The horse ran up to her and put its nuzzle in her neck. Lexy rode her around saying "I found my horse" over and over again. All of a sudden, Pebble started running for the darkest, creepiest, and biggest woods in the whole town. "Stop, Stop!" Lexy screamed, but it was no use. Pebble was running even faster. Lexy thought she was going to fall off, but of course she didn't. It seemed liked hours, and they were still in the woods. There was no light. Lexy didn't know if they were going in circles or going in a straight path. Lexy was crying. At least she thought she was, but she wasn't sure.
Eventually, she found an opening. It was by an ocean. There were jellyfish, crabs, and fish in the water. It wasn't ordinary. There were so many. Way too many. Lexy started counting them. When she got to a hundred of each, she stopped. "I've never seen so many." Lexy said. Then she remembered her dad telling her a story about when he was chasing his dog. He found this ocean. It had about a thousand of each kind of fish right by the shore. Then she remebered that her dad got captured when he was on this island. Suddenly, there were people racing towards them with sticks and stones. Lexy and Pebble look into the water and find a pulsing light shining from it. Pebble and Lexy jump for it, then everything was black.
(Part 2)
Most stories start with once upon a time, but this story is not like that. This story could be true or maybe it couldn't. You will just have to read and find out. It has adventure, mystery, saddness, and happiness all in one. It's about a girl and a horse. This horse was not an ordinary horse. It was a magic horse, not the kind that could speak, but the kind that feels like magic when you ride it.
Lexy was soaring around the house on her horse, Pebble. It felt like she was flying. Every morning she would ride around her town and show off her horse. One night she heard Pebble pounding her hooves on the side of the door. Something was not right. Pebble had never done that before. Suddenly, a dreadful thought came into Lexy's mind. "What if there was an animal attacking Pebble!" Lexy felt helpless. She ran outside with her father's gun, just in case there was an animal in the barn. The stall was open!!! Pebble was gone!! "Pebble!!" Lexy screamed. She ran through the town screaming her horse's name thinking maybe she could hear her. But no, Pebble was gone forever. Well, at least that's what Lexy thought. Even though she thought Pebble was gone forever, a little part of her still had hope.
Finally, Lexy saw a silouhette of a horse. She ran saying " Pebble! Pebble!" The horse ran up to her and put its nuzzle in her neck. Lexy rode her around saying "I found my horse" over and over again. All of a sudden, Pebble started running for the darkest, creepiest, and biggest woods in the whole town. "Stop, Stop!" Lexy screamed, but it was no use. Pebble was running even faster. Lexy thought she was going to fall off, but of course she didn't. It seemed liked hours, and they were still in the woods. There was no light. Lexy didn't know if they were going in circles or going in a straight path. Lexy was crying. At least she thought she was, but she wasn't sure.
Eventually, she found an opening. It was by an ocean. There were jellyfish, crabs, and fish in the water. It wasn't ordinary. There were so many. Way too many. Lexy started counting them. When she got to a hundred of each, she stopped. "I've never seen so many." Lexy said. Then she remembered her dad telling her a story about when he was chasing his dog. He found this ocean. It had about a thousand of each kind of fish right by the shore. Then she remebered that her dad got captured when he was on this island. Suddenly, there were people racing towards them with sticks and stones. Lexy and Pebble look into the water and find a pulsing light shining from it. Pebble and Lexy jump for it, then everything was black.
(Part 2)
Friday, March 2, 2007
My first blog
Hi, my name is Hannah. I'm in the 5th grade and loving it. My teacher totally rocks. My favorite subject is math. I love horses. I have a dog and a cat. I luv animals no matter what they look like or what kind they are. I like hamsters all the way up to giraffes. This is my first time ever having a blog. I will write stories and tell what my thoughts are. I love writing stories and hope to get one published someday. My fave author is Caroline Keene. I love her Nancy Drew books. I'm into mysteries, adventure, and just having fun. Everyday after I'm done with my homework, I love just having fun and being funny. I hope you enjoy my blog, send comments, but please be considerate and say nice comments.
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